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Episode 2 finally released

Posted by Jasonbunny - 4 days ago


So finally I got the cartoon done and I wanna hear y’all’s thoughts on how it looks here? Like anything you’d suggest me to change up or whatever for my next project like improving the graphics or making the storylines more coherent and expansive next time? I’d appreciate to know y’all’s criticisms on this! :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5nuczusC_Ms


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Pretty good. Makes me want to see what happens in the next episode. Backgrounds could use a little more detail. I definitely know it can be a pain and time consuming but it'd make the word feel a little more inhabited. Like for example more detail in Jason's room or a person or silhouettes in the background in the some of the scenes like the classroom or hospital. Overall I like it.

Yea the reason why it was very empty in some scenes is because like it kinda takes place early in the morning throughout like the first few scenes I tried to hint towards that with like the sky colors and all as it kinda changes as the cartoon goes on.
I’ll work on making it feel more lively for the next episode. Thanks! :)